Two Poems
Dear God
I saw your billboard today – the one you signed,
the one that said: Life is short.
Eternity isn’t.
God
I wondered about your punctuation, why you created two
stand-alone sentences. I would have used a semicolon
because it seems more powerful to connect the two –
you know, like dying may seem scary on its own
but if you think this short life is like a day in the park compared
to what comes next, the threat of eternity really picks up some steam.
I’m sorry – it’s presumptuous of me to instruct You on punctuation
but I feel more and more presumptuous these days. It could be eternity
but I think it’s really just another day looming like the next eight or 10 hours
and all it will take to make my way through. I’m tired,
you know? You must know. Have you ever considered
reincarnation – how nice it might be to have a good long rest as a tree, rooted
in earth but able to rustle and sway? It sounds pretty great to me.
The thing is, I’m not clear about your whole eternity plan. Keeping people out –
that part feels familiar – it’s pretty much the way things work around here too.
But have you ever considered just letting us all in – every single person
you made no matter what our short lives offered
or withheld? I don’t know. It is lovely to think about
though. I like to picture you pondering it; (semicolon)
I like to picture you considering the possibility of another way.

Northern Spring Peeper
You’re a nickel
of a thing, same
color,you fling
yourself akimbo and not
like a frog at all.
You’re a child
no matterhow old,
you heedless bit,
squashable from lack
of consideration
for stomp,
you and your
careless gaze.
No grace, no reason,
all go. Plaintive peanut
of perpetual resound.
You common
implausibility,
intimate
with ground.
Water born
lung breatheryou
too small to be called
quitswhen come
what may. You’re hope
looking down, every kind
of possibility
unbound.
Persimmon Tree readers will love young Joey’s mother, Ellie, as she navigates through poverty and around a philandering, alcoholic husband to help her boy achieve his dream of becoming a classical musician. She scrimps and saves enough to take her nine-year-old boy to the San Francisco Symphony to hear Tchaikovsky’s Violin Concerto, though she herself had never before set foot in a concert hall.
Readers will follow Joey through his childhood with its real-life pain, and watch as he, too, navigates around his father and uses his creativity to passively “get even” for his dad’s cruelty, always knowing his mother will be there to rescue him. Though their relationship is not without its trials, she models for him loyalty, persistence and hard work and allows no excuses when times are hard.
In high school Joey falls quickly and deeply in love with a curly-haired beauty, and is torn between his love for her and pursuing his musical dream. When another girl courts him and offers to help him pay his way through college and music lessons, Joey marries her, thus forming a tormented triangle love affair.
You will follow Joey as he auditions for the Sacramento Symphony and Music Circus. You will be there with him when he plays his horn with Frank Sinatra, studio musicians from Hollywood, The Beach Boys, Dorothy Dandridge and Johnny Cash at Folsom Prison.
Having achieved his musical goal, will Joey ever be able to set his personal life right?
Nanci's short stories and poems have been published in The California Writers Club Literary Review, a CWC Anthology, October Hill Magazine, The Fault Zone, the Sacramento Poetry Society’s Tule Review, Your Daily Poem, The Monterey Poetry Review, the Haight Ashbury Literary Journal and many other online and print publications.
Check out Nanci’s website for samples of her writing and art, click here to listen to the music in Tears and Trombones, and watch for Nanci’s new book of poetry coming out this fall.
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Susan Carlson lives and works in southeastern Michigan. Her work has appeared in various journals including Passager, River Heron Review, Gyroscope Review, Typishly, and Persimmon Tree and has been nominated for Best of the Net.
With degrees in Asian history, Lynn B. Connor planned to be an academic. That was short-lived. She realized that sharing stories that explore other times and places is what she enjoyed. Her stories and poems have appeared in literary journals over the last fifty years. A few years ago she remembered the title of a book, Painting with Light, which she’d read as a teenager. The only thing she remembered about it was the title, but that made her see differently when taking a photo. Go to
Both of these poems are so engaging! Iparituclarly like your letter to God. Such good questions!!!
Carol and Alicia, thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate you sharing your feedback with me! Susan
I really adore both of these poems. These joyful and real words touched my heart today.
Both of your poems, Susan, powerfully impacted me as I began my writing day today. The voice in each felt familiar and comfortable—delighting but also encouraging me to keep my own voice (poetic and otherwise) strong. These are simply wonderful!